Sunday 22 April 2007

The Stag

Seven days before the laughter of the horns of the Bacchae crossed the cusp of the hill and into the broad valley on the green road to the Court of King Jelly Roll, six witnessed the scene to be described. The six were; Mad Sweeney from treetops; Yuxa, winking from the undergrowth; Gilfaethwy as boar, upon whom was Freya with feathers; Hong-yu, a vixen; Badessy from the sky.

In a glade by a pool, a shallow pool of rained water stretched barely rippling like a reflection of the sun, a stag stood grooming. No other deer awake or near, the stag looked placid up to trees like antlers. In grazing brambles stark against the last of withered leaves before the breeze, he found a thirst and came as many days before to where the water gathered for its travels. With the quivering splendid soft bronze of his flanks in clear view now of the sky, it was no wonder that the starlings and the blackbirds fought their choruses through the waves. The stag approached the water, crisp blue under noon day Sun, and bent his neck and lapped it cool and clear, still holding the green scent of dew from dark before the dawn.

As the chorus continued, many tones, the stag drank deep, and, as the day maintained her thrilling promise of the blossom, the water, never moving, appeared suddenly as a tapestry, became a gauze of liquid gold, but fresh. The whole world might have gasped but for the stag who, with brown eyes above dignity, continued to drink, and the air felt pregnant with the loosing muscles of a real beast taking in what water he required. That gold, never a necklace, shone then in his eyes.

In seven days, with the antlered branches stretching in their buds, the first faint echoes came of the coming congregation. Wine in every pocket of the broad grins on their faces, they rounded the hill wreathed in vines with no alarm to the various animals watching. At first they stared near silent, wide-eyed into the sky between two hills, and then they flung their bare flesh into brambles, laughing, bleeding, and they called with pipes and laughter to the animals and they brought them, always dancing, to the fold and carried on with singing down the green road home.

7 comments:

videodrone said...

A certain Narnian feel to this Jack. Apart from the bit with the brambles, that was a little upsetting.
I like how both you and Adam are right 'ensemble' pieces. There's a real suggestion of a Pooka genre coming thorugh these days.

Bic Biros & Moldova said...

That's a point I can't help but like.
Damn- now I've gone and said it.

videodrone said...

right 'ensemble' pieces...

that's not at all what I meant to write. I like it for it.

Bic Biros & Moldova said...

I think, to an extent, Me and Jack could be described as 'right 'ensemble' pieces'.
It's certainly the first instance I've been aware of.

videodrone said...

Yes you are a pair of right 'ensemble' pieces is probably the first impression people get of you two if they meet you together. You give off that air.

Bic Biros & Moldova said...

On a more usual note I do like this little number Jack.
I was wondering what scale you had for this limb of your writings?

Jack Gander said...

Scale... let's see... large, I think. I'm just about to post "The Fox". The possibilities are endless, and it's all in my mind. All the birds, beasts and flowers, Moxther.