This is a website (click the title) I have found that attempts to make insect based haiku.
Post your own results.... here was my first one:
green and black
a crane-fly climbs
far from a specimen jar
Monday, 30 April 2007
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ragged and beautiful
an ant flutters
near a trap
I think this one is flawed.
it might a queen ant?
the flying fly
passes towards the window
brave, green
also flawed, but nicely so.
the egg-bound dragonfly
glides beside the flower
far from a pond
egg-bound?
a fragile ant
levitates beside the garden
far from the garden
This on i think is very spiritual and deep. It reminded me of early Buddhist mantras.
Just one more...
old and flying
a butterfly crawls
beside a window
What a strange concept and what a strange concept for a website. It, perhaps, needs a little fine-tuning.
This may be the primary conclusion from Your post and it's branches.
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