Monday, 30 April 2007

Insect Haiku

This is a website (click the title) I have found that attempts to make insect based haiku.
Post your own results.... here was my first one:

green and black
a crane-fly climbs
far from a specimen jar

6 comments:

ndh said...

ragged and beautiful
an ant flutters
near a trap


I think this one is flawed.

videodrone said...

it might a queen ant?

videodrone said...

the flying fly
passes towards the window
brave, green


also flawed, but nicely so.

Bic Biros & Moldova said...

the egg-bound dragonfly
glides beside the flower
far from a pond


egg-bound?

videodrone said...

a fragile ant
levitates beside the garden
far from the garden




This on i think is very spiritual and deep. It reminded me of early Buddhist mantras.

Bic Biros & Moldova said...

Just one more...

old and flying
a butterfly crawls
beside a window

What a strange concept and what a strange concept for a website. It, perhaps, needs a little fine-tuning.

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